The Story

Arina and Iji had a fairly peaceful life in Akato Village, but they soon find their lives turned upside down when a fire mage appears, leaving nothing but destruction in her wake. Just when things seem to be calming down, Arina finds herself pulled into the middle of a 300-year-old conflict, where she must find a way to stop the emergence of a dark power…

This story is approximately 10 chapters long, with a few side stories as I feel like writing them.

There really isn’t much to say. If you wish to contact her for some reason, email works fine!

kabocha .:AT:. nagareboshi .:DOT:. org would be the address! (Remember, replace those weird ats and dots for the symbols!)

Quick Questions

• Why did you rewrite the story?
  • Short answer, I hated the stuff I initially did for the web, and I kinda wrote myself into a corner sometimes. While the story is complete [and on paper], it’s hard when re-writing sometimes because I ended up omitting things or leaving plot holes… Yep.
• Can I find the old versions online somewhere?
  • Yes! Please check here!
• Critique. Do you mind if I give some?
  • Nah, not at all. If you’re uncomfortable with leaving comments on pages, please feel free to email me with your critique.
    Just remember that I may not reply to this unless I have questions about it.

…More added as they’re asked.